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[Reply] #221
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JBrenn Is a bias idiot, I wouldn’t waste my time.


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[Reply] #222
08-24-2014 01:05 AM
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We should form a crew on their site if they let us.


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[Reply] #223
08-24-2014 07:27 PM
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fuck off was trash and that guy is top 7 on their site? lmao
Oh and King John killed Scriptz

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08-24-2014 07:41 PM
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John had bars

Kinda hard to believe Weezy’s his favorite


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[Reply] #225
08-24-2014 07:46 PM
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Kid KO wrote: Amazing.I’ve seen Snipes' Facebook selfies,Green’s profile picture on letsbeef,CJ’s youtube videos,and now Esco’s pic.All that’s left is Niggalo. shocked


What’s CJ YouTube acc.?


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Never mind I found it.


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[Reply] #227
08-25-2014 04:33 PM
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This is the best feedback so far.

Bob Barker wrote: Nothing makes my dick harder than watchin' an orphanage burn..
...I bet he’s sportin' a perm, twist’em into a contortionist worm!!

^^^ 2/5 The opening line made me laugh. But this wasn’t really a punch


His orifices squirm, iLL’s ISIS my kill license has a view of you in order
He’s Legend?! To the ground is where you’ll 'be headed' like that 'news reporter'!!

^^^ 3/5 meh... the be headed/beheaded stuff has been done a bunch. So has the ISIS approach. But none the less it was a punch

You half wit I’m a genius craftin' a thesis to smash you to pieces
iLL’s a classic machinist, keepin' it tighter than fuckin' a fat bitch in a Prius!!!

^^^ 3/5 self-hype... cool in that regard but this is a battle

You write massively weak shit, to a fight I bring all types of finishers..
..With fists like a prisoner, with yours.. John 'Hands Cocks like a signature!!!

^^^ 3.5/5 your first directed punch. Wasn’t great but it was cool. Although you don’t have to force the multis. “Fists like a prisoner” doesn’t really make sense, just thrown in for the rhyme.

Righteous calligrapher, my song ballads have Psalms patterns and Khans pattens
You’re stupid decisions precedent, President nuclear fission, spawn havoc on John atoms!!! WHEW

^^^ 3/5 again this was almost all forced multis. Just because words rhyme doesn’t mean they should go together. You had a decent concept John Adams/John’s Atoms... but you didn’t execute it at all

His lesson plans ghost, body bag’em against me he’s left concession stand broke
LA tell’em me to be the better man, NOPE! Stormin' on’em like the weatherman spoke!!

^^^ 2.5/5 not a punch. “concession stand broke” what does that mean? You’re too focused on multis man.

I’ll have seven damn quotes off 2 bars, you’re tired and played, a liar and lame
Your verse is tighter?! John settin' a 'church on fire' still wouldn’t be 'a choir in flames'!! STOP

^^^ 3.5/5 your best couplet. Pretty cool

iLL’s a pyro insane that severs frames, he’s tryna get away like clingin' teens
Big and mean?! PLEASE you’re like Kevin James of MVC... the King of Queens!!


^^^ 3.5/5 I don’t know what MVC means here. But the punch was funny regardless. Set-up was more forced multis. If you were trying to get away... you wouldn’t be clinging.


Overall: 24/40 You need to focus on punches, and having those punches actually hit your opponent. Battles aren’t self-hype, and most people will see past a bunch of forced multis. You had a couple cool concepts, like John Adams that weren’t executed. Last two couplets were your best.






I said...King a beast, but don’t mistake this for Tekken Fam
Cause it aint a game when I lift the Tech And Blam
But if ya wanna play, I’ll make ya block dissapear like it’s Tetris And
Fill ya body with more rounds than Vectorman

^^^ 6/10 cool flow, clever plays but they weren’t really punches, they definitely weren’t directed. Self hype.


Even ya girl know you a lame, calls you a bitch, puss, Even Fag
She hit me up like, “Can I come over, I Need A Man”
I said, “Sure, no problem, just Bring That Ass
Now ya Love coming to play with King, like the Cleveland Cavs

^^^ 5.5/10 meh... this was all kind of bland. And also not really any punches. Just statements.


Don’t talk wreckless, say shit that’ll make me wanna Pop The Nine
Or, grab the DE if I don’t like the way you Talk in Rhymes
So if you stay spitting flagrant, think “immigration”
I’ll give iLL Eagles (illegals) if he Cross That Line

^^^ 7/10 first two lines were filler, but the second two bars were actually really cool. Immigration and “cross that line” don’t rhyme so it’s good that you had it in the 4 bar scheme like that. Best punch of the battle.

Yall don’t realize what kind of Peril This Man’s In
For all that shit talkin', I’m bout to Sterile This Man’s Chin
Then 'aim the blicka' when the Barrel In Hand Kid
To put' flames to Scripture' like I’m Marilyn Manson

^^^ 7/10 again first two were filler, but the second were nice. Pretty solid nameplay/punch


Overall: 25.5/40 you were off to a pretty slow start, the self hype and statements... but you finally started swinging towards the end and had two solid punches. Watch all that filler though, takes away from your verse.



Vote -King he had the better punches. Both had two that were okay, and Kings 2 were best. Both had a loooooooooooooooooot of filler/self hype. John kept a better flow, like I said iLL watch those forced multis man.


^This describes Scriptz and John’s battle perfectly.


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08-25-2014 06:32 PM
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Nigga’s been ghost since that battle


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08-26-2014 06:15 PM
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daydizzle89 wrote: Im gonna have you tasting “Porky Pig”, im gonna go “ham” on you bitch
You’re the “big bad wolf”, except the only thing you “blowing” is on my dick/



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[Reply] #230
08-26-2014 06:36 PM
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Kid KO Shadow Clone wrote:

daydizzle89 wrote: Im gonna have you tasting “Porky Pig”, im gonna go “ham” on you bitch
You’re the “big bad wolf”, except the only thing you “blowing” is on my dick/


Not gonna lie that was a pretty good / decent one especially from Day, lol.

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08-26-2014 06:37 PM
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BTW it’s Niggalo, just using an alt' account so don’t tell anyone lol.

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08-26-2014 08:03 PM
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InfamousRhymez wrote:

Kid KO Shadow Clone wrote:

daydizzle89 wrote: Im gonna have you tasting &#147;Porky Pig&#148;, im gonna go &#147;ham&#148; on you bitch
You&#146;re the &#147;big bad wolf&#148;, except the only thing you &#147;blowing&#148; is on my dick/


Not gonna lie that was a pretty good / decent one especially from Day, lol.


Wile E. isn’t even a wolf.


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[Reply] #233
08-26-2014 08:35 PM
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Kid KO Shadow Clone wrote:

InfamousRhymez wrote:

Kid KO Shadow Clone wrote:

daydizzle89 wrote: Im gonna have you tasting &#147;Porky Pig&#148;, im gonna go &#147;ham&#148; on you bitch
You&#146;re the &#147;big bad wolf&#148;, except the only thing you &#147;blowing&#148; is on my dick/


Not gonna lie that was a pretty good / decent one especially from Day, lol.


Wile E. isn’t even a wolf.

Yeah, it didn’t really make sense, It could’ve been better but the bul don’t know how to use his punchlines correctly. It was decent at the most as i’ve stated before.

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08-26-2014 08:36 PM
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Niggalo,aren’t you Djacklez(on LA)?


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08-26-2014 08:38 PM
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Kid KO wrote: Niggalo,aren’t you Djacklez(on LA)?

Haha, yeah, you can tell them that. Sorry for gettin' Jackalz banned, just wanted to keep up on the info and shit that’s been goin' on there. (I was actually MvC DJacklez)

But now you can actually just clear ur cache and passwords, then u’ll be able to see all the stuff on the website.

Edited 08-26-2014 08:40 PM by InfamousRhymez
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08-26-2014 08:41 PM
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InfamousRhymez wrote:

Kid KO wrote: Niggalo,aren’t you Djacklez(on LA)?

Haha, yeah, you can tell them that. Sorry for gettin' Jackalz banned, just wanted to keep up on the info and shit that’s been goin' on there. (I was actually MvC DJacklez)

But now you can actually just clear ur cache and passwords, then u’ll be able to see all the stuff on the website.


I’ll try as hard as I can to get him unbanned.


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08-26-2014 08:44 PM
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Kid KO wrote:

InfamousRhymez wrote:

Kid KO wrote: Niggalo,aren’t you Djacklez(on LA)?

Haha, yeah, you can tell them that. Sorry for gettin' Jackalz banned, just wanted to keep up on the info and shit that’s been goin' on there. (I was actually MvC DJacklez)

But now you can actually just clear ur cache and passwords, then u’ll be able to see all the stuff on the website.


I’ll try as hard as I can to get him unbanned.

Cool

BTW your battle with Creep lookin' fresh, didn’t like the creepy crawly queef line though, overall it was pretty good tho'. Good effort. I’d rate it prob a 7/10 keep elevating dude

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08-26-2014 08:52 PM
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#freejeezy


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[Reply] #239
08-26-2014 08:54 PM
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InfamousRhymez wrote:

Kid KO wrote:

InfamousRhymez wrote:

Kid KO wrote: Niggalo,aren’t you Djacklez(on LA)?

Haha, yeah, you can tell them that. Sorry for gettin' Jackalz banned, just wanted to keep up on the info and shit that’s been goin' on there. (I was actually MvC DJacklez)

But now you can actually just clear ur cache and passwords, then u’ll be able to see all the stuff on the website.


I’ll try as hard as I can to get him unbanned.

Cool

BTW your battle with Creep lookin' fresh, didn’t like the creepy crawly queef line though, overall it was pretty good tho'. Good effort. I’d rate it prob a 7/10 keep elevating dude


That was one of my weakest verses IMO.I highly doubt he’s even gonna respond.


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08-26-2014 09:05 PM
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Undefinded rare u.o.e.n.o wrote:

Kid Esco wrote: #freejeezy


He lock up

he might be going for the long one brehs



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