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I make it burn whhen you pee
Im the pain you realy cant see
I have the record for the longest killing spree
Magic Johnsonis the only one who got rid of me


Some people put ''First'' in front of my name
Live is what I take
Infact, I can take in with a simple mistake


Im your what your Health Class warned u about
Im what Holy Nuns told you about
Some times, I’k make red come out your spout


I kill 70% of the deaths in Africa
Im so commom now
Im the new Asthma


what do i think of this poem part 2

Wow, thats deep***************** 33%

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That sucked***************** 33%

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that was okay 0%


That was Evil 0%


Your a Emo 0%


U shud stick 2 raps***************** 33%

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The poll lacks “Just no."


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LordMarluxia wrote: The poll lacks “Just no.“




that was mean.

I respect your answer.


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I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.


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NihilusRavager7780 wrote: I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.



Oh, my. I didn’t have guts to say that.

You, sir, win the interwebz for being mean.


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NihilusRavager7780 wrote: I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.




OKay, I respect wat u say.

May I ask Did u understand it.


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98supra wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote: I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.




OKay, I respect wat u say.

May I ask Did u understand it.



Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.


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NihilusRavager7780 wrote:

98supra wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote: I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.




OKay, I respect wat u say.

May I ask Did u understand it.



Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.





Do u mind telling me wat it was about.


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NihilusRavager7780 wrote:

98supra wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote: I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.




OKay, I respect wat u say.

May I ask Did u understand it.



Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.





Do u mind telling me wat it was about.


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98supra wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote:

98supra wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote: I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.




OKay, I respect wat u say.

May I ask Did u understand it.



Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.





Do u mind telling me wat it was about.



Why should I tell you? You made it. You tell me.


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Phail it sucked so much I purposely misspelled “FAIL”

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1indainfinite wrote: Phail it sucked so much I purposely misspelled “FAIL”



No, you spelled it right.


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My poem is much better than this gar-bage.


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NihilusRavager7780 wrote:

98supra wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote:

98supra wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote: I’ll tell you the brutally honest truth. That fucking sucked.




OKay, I respect wat u say.

May I ask Did u understand it.



Yes, I understand that the poem sucked balls. I am being serious. You need to try more.





Do u mind telling me wat it was about.



Why should I tell you? You made it. You tell me.




Aids


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If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS

AIDS
by Judy Burnette

AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.

We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.

So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.

You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.


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Edited 05-01-2008 05:00 PM by Mein Square
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NihilusRavager7780 wrote: If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS

AIDS
by Judy Burnette

AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.

We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.

So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.

You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.


Boring...

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1indainfinite wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote: If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS

AIDS
by Judy Burnette

AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.

We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.

So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.

You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.


Boring...



hahaha


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NihilusRavager7780 wrote:

1indainfinite wrote:

NihilusRavager7780 wrote: If you want to make a good poem, be creative, and think about what you want to write, just don’t post it and try to wing it. This is a poem about AIDS

AIDS
by Judy Burnette

AIDS was always just a word
yet now it bears your name;
But it has not changed how I feel
I love you just the same.

We should never judge another
with thoughtless words or deeds;
For we all have within us
wounds that have made us bleed.

So you have an illness
none of us quite understand;
It doesn’t make you less a person
nor less a man.

You are still that same sweet person
that I have always known;
No matter the distance between us
in my heart you will always have a home.


Boring...



hahaha


I just don’t see life like I used toosad

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