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[Reply] #81
05-01-2009 04:01 PM
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The Surfer wrote:

Chilly man wrote:

The Surfer wrote:

Chilly man wrote:

The Surfer wrote:

Chilly man wrote: Amber


My love flies to me on etherial wings,
'Tis so wonderful to feel the joy that she brings.
Her words pierce my heart like cupid’s quick arrows,
I hear her words in my mind like the song of the sparrows.

I crave her messages, I wait just to hear,
Her words in my puter, so sweet and so dear.
She lightens my heart, she quickens my pulse,
She talks and she laughs and she gives me some luls.

I know what she looks like, her description was clear,
But I know her sweet heart, I have nothing to fear.
I have a big crush on this girl here on-line,
If we never meet it will prolly be fine.

For I have known love now, my heart has been healed,
That hole in my heart has been mended and healed.
I sit here and wait to see her come on,
I’ll sit here all night till mornings sweet dawn.

I’m happy, I’m free, I feel so alive,
I’ve found a good friend, and that ain’t no jive.
So, come to me sweet angel, and bring me some joy,
I love you so much, I’m one happy boy.

Richie


You mean ethereal?
GJ btw,i know who amber is now.



Thanks Surfer, see? You’re smarter than me. And just how do you know who she is (and don’t say her ID)?


I was reading that conversation you had with her lover.




WTF you talking about? Don’t YOU start this hating shit now too. I thought you were okay?


I don’t follow?




What conversation and what lover dude. PM me, it shouldn’t be on here.


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[Reply] #82
05-01-2009 04:09 PM
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Boy,i was OFF.


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05-01-2009 04:48 PM
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The Surfer wrote: Boy,i was OFF.




lol smiley


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[Reply] #84
05-01-2009 05:50 PM
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Chilly man wrote: Amber


My love flies to me on ethereal wings,
'Tis so wonderful to feel the joy that she brings.
Her words pierce my heart like cupid’s quick arrows,
I hear her words in my mind like the song of the sparrows.

I crave her messages, I wait just to hear,
Her words in my puter, so sweet and so dear.
She lightens my heart, she quickens my pulse,
She talks and she laughs and she gives me some luls.

I know what she looks like, her description was clear,
But I know her sweet heart, I have nothing to fear.
I have a big crush on this girl here on-line,
If we never meet it will prolly be fine.

For I have known love now, my heart has been healed,
That hole in my heart has been mended and healed.
I sit here and wait to see her come on,
I’ll sit here all night till mornings sweet dawn.

I’m happy, I’m free, I feel so alive,
I’ve found a good friend, and that ain’t no jive.
So, come to me sweet angel, and bring me some joy,
I love you so much, I’m one happy boy.

Richie


im glad you like her...but i found her firest shes mine!lol jk...


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05-01-2009 05:59 PM
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Mar,

Did you see posts #75 thru #83?


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05-01-2009 06:00 PM
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Archangel Azrael wrote: what r u 2 talkin bout


...


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[Reply] #87
05-01-2009 06:02 PM
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Chilly man wrote: Mar,

Did you see posts #75 thru #83?


X_X im so confused!WHAAAAA!!!!mes dont knows!!!


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05-01-2009 06:08 PM
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Mar_hinata wrote:

Chilly man wrote: Mar,

Did you see posts #75 thru #83?


X_X im so confused!WHAAAAA!!!!mes dont knows!!!




LMAO Go back on this thread and check out post #75 thru #83 between me and the Surfer.


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05-01-2009 06:10 PM
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I read all those...i did it was just confusing and now i get it and now im not going to tell you


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05-01-2009 06:20 PM
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sad :P


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05-01-2009 06:23 PM
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^_^ stuff love my friend..tough love


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05-01-2009 06:25 PM
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Mar_hinata wrote: ^_^ stuff love my friend..tough love




lol smiley


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05-01-2009 09:13 PM
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Bumped so Butterfly and Wolfie can see my poem and critique it (I’m trying to get praise and attention).


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05-02-2009 12:21 AM
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theres a girl i know
she wears a mask
were every one thinks one thind but in front of some people she takes of the mask
theres people who see her with out the mask and run
then there the people that see her stick around and hurt her
this girl i know strugles with her to sides
that once in a while she gets memories back and it makes it so shes not wearing and mask and all shes wants to do is cry
but no one knows this girl in the mask


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05-02-2009 12:55 AM
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Chilly man wrote: Amber


My love flies to me on ethereal wings,
'Tis so wonderful to feel the joy that she brings.
Her words pierce my heart like cupid’s quick arrows,
I hear her words in my mind like the song of the sparrows.

I crave her messages, I wait just to hear,
Her words in my puter, so sweet and so dear.
She lightens my heart, she quickens my pulse,
She talks and she laughs and she gives me some luls.

I know what she looks like, her description was clear,
But I know her sweet heart, I have nothing to fear.
I have a big crush on this girl here on-line,
If we never meet it will prolly be fine.

For I have known love now, my heart has been healed,
That hole in my heart has been mended and healed.
I sit here and wait to see her come on,
I’ll sit here all night till mornings sweet dawn.

I’m happy, I’m free, I feel so alive,
I’ve found a good friend, and that ain’t no jive.
So, come to me sweet angel, and bring me some joy,
I love you so much, I’m one happy boy.

Richie



i am finally commenting on it. this is very sweet. thank u for writing this for me!

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05-02-2009 01:01 AM
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heres some of my poems
when you look into my eyes
you see a friend
when you look into my eyes
you see a sad girl
when you look into my eyes
you see love
______________________________________
theres this girl i know
who doesnt have a care in the world
I wish i was like that girl
to not have a care in the world
thats true freedom!


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05-02-2009 01:08 AM
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So sweet, so tender, so sad. What a girl.


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05-02-2009 01:09 AM
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You’re welcome Amber.


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05-02-2009 01:33 AM
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^^ lol...im just a big old sap..well and dork/nerd XD


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[Reply] #100
05-02-2009 01:40 AM
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No your not a big old sap, dork or nerd. You is Marisa! You’re a great girl. smiley


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Edited 05-02-2009 01:52 AM by butterfly

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