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Does any one like my poem? It's on my profile 2.

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09-23-2007 11:16 PM
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Untitled
- inspired by Natalie Wright’s Nightly Wonderland

My room is damp and oozes shadows down the walls
The shadows form cobwebs over my eyes
The spiders who sleep on my lashes make my skin crawl and turn red
I jump out of my bed to open the door
a blue shaft of light
and in my haste
I break my fingers

If ya like it u can add me as a friend.


Does any one like my poem? It's on my profile 2.

HELL YA!********** 18%

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09-23-2007 11:18 PM
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awesome

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When will it be out?


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mr 1 2 i dont like you wrote: When will it be out?





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ITS EMO!!!!!1111111oneoneone


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dang i didn’t think so but i luv criticism. Thanks everyone and this poem is not in my profile anymore.

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