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[Reply] #1
10-08-2008 07:57 PM
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The Power Within
The Power Within
nig pls
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since the old one is locked
this is going to be the new one so post your poems here


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[Reply] #2
10-08-2008 07:58 PM
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ghey

[Reply] #3
10-08-2008 08:01 PM
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nig pls
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ok ill start

Rorschach is a
noob

When he posts
stupid

Like a fat
chicken

Afraid of the
dark


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10-08-2008 08:02 PM
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ghey

[Reply] #5
10-08-2008 08:05 PM
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no


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10-08-2008 08:27 PM
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wtf is this shit


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[Reply] #7
10-08-2008 08:28 PM
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Rogue wrote: wtf is this shit


lol.


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[Reply] #8
10-08-2008 08:29 PM
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ghey

[Reply] #9
10-13-2008 08:22 PM
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bigleagueplaya23
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1 2 3 to the 4
you bitches never heard of me but now im knockin on your door,

i may be white, but my rhymes is tight,
niggas see me in the street they be like “damn he nice”
i aint gonna shoot, and i aint gonna fight,
but i just might- fuck ya girl up the ass if the price is right

i got the tightest flow on the planet, most rappers black as tar but im the whitest known granite, but i aint gonna worry kaz the greatest dont panic.

fuck with me, ill cook you for breakfast like IHOP. serve you with a side of bacon, bitch- why not?

my flo so sick like luda-cris. i dont go near ya girl she smell like tuna-fish. this rhyme so hot that nothin can ruin-this. your jaws on the floor like u cant believe im doin-this, ima numba one rapper i be provin-this.

Im white like snow so you can call me a blizard, the way i drop these raps u can call me a wizard.

dont be fooled by my friendly habits, kaz ima hop on ya moms ass like we matin' rabbits.

the time has come for me to end this shit, yo mom is calling so i gotta split.

[Reply] #10
10-13-2008 08:32 PM
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bigleagueplaya23 wrote: 1 2 3 to the 4
you bitches never heard of me but now im knockin on your door,

i may be white, but my rhymes is tight,
niggas see me in the street they be like “damn he nice”
i aint gonna shoot, and i aint gonna fight,
but i just might- fuck ya girl up the ass if the price is right

i got the tightest flow on the planet, most rappers black as tar but im the whitest known granite, but i aint gonna worry kaz the greatest dont panic.

fuck with me, ill cook you for breakfast like IHOP. serve you with a side of bacon, bitch- why not?

my flo so sick like luda-cris. i dont go near ya girl she smell like tuna-fish. this rhyme so hot that nothin can ruin-this. your jaws on the floor like u cant believe im doin-this, ima numba one rapper i be provin-this.

Im white like snow so you can call me a blizard, the way i drop these raps u can call me a wizard.

dont be fooled by my friendly habits, kaz ima hop on ya moms ass like we matin' rabbits.

the time has come for me to end this shit, yo mom is calling so i gotta split.


is that a poem?

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10-15-2008 11:41 PM
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this topic is a failure


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10-15-2008 11:44 PM
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This is beyond ghey.


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10-15-2008 11:54 PM
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because the TPW made it.................no comment


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[Reply] #14
10-16-2008 01:41 PM
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Rochdale_Soulja
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Ok...
ill ave a quick go wink

roses are red, lemons are sour
open your legs and ill show you some power


I wrote an awful poem,
it was bad in the extreme,
I showed it to my sister,
and it made my sister scream.

I gave it to my mother and she promptly flipped her slid,
my father blew a gasket
and my little brother hid.

I brough it with me
to school today,
my teacher nearly fainted
and my friends ran away.


Lol !!!

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10-16-2008 11:12 PM
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lol
this is like an all out attack on TPW...lol


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10-18-2008 07:03 PM
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chili
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IíM SORRY I LEFT YOU; BUT I FELT LIKE YOU DIDNíT NEED ME: CHENILLE 10.17.08

I find myself restless,
And constantly thinking of you,
The words you chose,
The way you talk,
Plays over and over in my head again.
From the day I met you,
I had this gut feeling I needed you,
You acted as if,
You could fill in the gap,
That has been holding me back.
I let go,
Of things that were important to me,
For you,
But it was too late,
I thought we would have tried us out,
I guess I was wrong,
Stupid me,
Like alwaysÖeh.

It hurts to hear about her,
I try to act like it donít.
I have a lot of strong feelings for you,
WhyÖ?
I honestly donít know.
Itís not like we ever shared a relationship,
Right?
But Iíve been holding on for as long as I could,
Because I thought things would change over time,
But it didnít.

All the mind games we played,
Just made everything worse.
From the start,
To the end,
Iíve told you it hurt,
Iíve opened my heart to you,
But it still didnít matter,
Obviously.
Iíve never felt this way about anyone else,
And again,
Itís sad,
Because we never shared anything special.

My head is telling me to let you go,
But my heart is telling me different.
What is it about you,
That keeps me going everyday?
What is it about you,
That I just canít throw away?
And thatís the thing,
I am unable to figure it out by myself.
And as I try to just lie down,
And think it all out,
Memories and thoughts of you,
Spin around in my head.

I canít help it,
I just canít stop them from evolving,
And when I see you my heart drops,
And ďGirlfriendĒ plays in my head.
I feel faintish,
And skittish,
And I know that you know this.
But you play it off,
Like everythingís normal,
When thereís so many things wrong.
You felt the connection from the start,
But you look at me,
Like Iím some kind of beast,
Whatís wrong with me?
I look at myself in the mirror everyday,
And think of ways,
To change,
The way that I look.

Am I too fat?
Am I too ugly?
I wonder everyday.
Itís gotten to me,
Everything youíve done to me,
And this is why youíre reading this,
And now I am dead.


I love you:

By Chenille St.Amour

[Reply] #17
10-18-2008 07:08 PM
Joined: 10-18-2008
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chili
Entree
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IíM SORRY I LEFT YOU; BUT I FELT LIKE YOU DIDNíT NEED ME: CHENILLE 10.17.08

I find myself restless,
And constantly thinking of you,
The words you chose,
The way you talk,
Plays over and over in my head again.
From the day I met you,
I had this gut feeling I needed you,
You acted as if,
You could fill in the gap,
That has been holding me back.
I let go,
Of things that were important to me,
For you,
But it was too late,
I thought we would have tried us out,
I guess I was wrong,
Stupid me,
Like alwaysÖeh.

It hurts to hear about her,
I try to act like it donít.
I have a lot of strong feelings for you,
WhyÖ?
I honestly donít know.
Itís not like we ever shared a relationship,
Right?
But Iíve been holding on for as long as I could,
Because I thought things would change over time,
But it didnít.

All the mind games we played,
Just made everything worse.
From the start,
To the end,
Iíve told you it hurt,
Iíve opened my heart to you,
But it still didnít matter,
Obviously.
Iíve never felt this way about anyone else,
And again,
Itís sad,
Because we never shared anything special.

My head is telling me to let you go,
But my heart is telling me different.
What is it about you,
That keeps me going everyday?
What is it about you,
That I just canít throw away?
And thatís the thing,
I am unable to figure it out by myself.
And as I try to just lie down,
And think it all out,
Memories and thoughts of you,
Spin around in my head.

I canít help it,
I just canít stop them from evolving,
And when I see you my heart drops,
And ďGirlfriendĒ plays in my head.
I feel faintish,
And skittish,
And I know that you know this.
But you play it off,
Like everythingís normal,
When thereís so many things wrong.
You felt the connection from the start,
But you look at me,
Like Iím some kind of beast,
Whatís wrong with me?
I look at myself in the mirror everyday,
And think of ways,
To change,
The way that I look.

Am I too fat?
Am I too ugly?
I wonder everyday.
Itís gotten to me,
Everything youíve done to me,
And this is why youíre reading this,
And now I am dead.


I love you:

By Chenille St.Amour

[Reply] #18
10-28-2008 11:44 AM
Joined: 10-03-2008
Posts: 2,103
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S.W.I.F.T
S.W.I.F.T
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Rep: 29

sigh this is a failure.


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[Reply] #19
10-28-2008 07:49 PM
Joined: 09-06-2008
Posts: 2,267
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Speakerzzz AKA Rap Beast...DAMN RIGHT
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Rep: 39

lock this shit.


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[Reply] #20
10-28-2008 07:49 PM
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AK-4Deception
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Reality isnt Real
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SPEAKERZZZ wrote: lock this shit.



lol


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